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Originally Posted by black_man I don't think i can make any sort of judgement or assumption as to whether it will be more effective in any form, since i am not aware of your concept. often i would find a form will tend to choose itself from the nature of the subject matter. i would feel as though it would depend on your intended audience, and the 'conflict in language' is indicative of that. if you could please elaborate on exactly what you are hoping to achieve with this poem and the concept i could try and suggest which form may be appropriate, though my opinion might be less valid in the sense that i am not terribly well-schooled in the compositional process of older styles of poetry. |
ok basically for an 'umbrella' overview, my concept or premise that covers each poem is the movements and events that occur, or could potentially occur, within the realms of the night... and as for intended audience .. the problem is that we've decided it is a universal topic and therefore applies to almost anyone. Initially what i hoped to achieve with this poem was experimentation with an alternate structure.. i.e the ode structure.. brought on my study of Keats, but my teacher wasn't sure whether this structure worked with the content of this poem.. which is essentially a woman dreaming of a man that may or may not be real, but now exists only in her dreams. haha i hoped that made it a bit clearer!