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4 Apr 2005, 5:13 PM
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18 Oct 2005, 11:17 PM     | Poetry down here? You can hide this advertisement by registering. i was wondering is this a place to put ones poetry like stuff we have written or should there be one made up |
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4 Apr 2005, 6:02 PM
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| FindWhatIsYet2BeFound  HSC: 2004 Gender: Female Location: a place where i call home
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20 Jan 2009, 7:58 PM  | post urs away....
__________________ "Peace, in the sense of the absence of war, is of little value to someone who is dying of hunger or cold. It will not remove the pain of torture inflicted on a prisoner of conscience. It does not comfort those who have lost their loved ones in floods caused by senseless deforestation in a neighboring country. Peace can only last where human rights are respected, where the people are fed, and where individuals and nations are free." - Dalai Lama |
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4 Apr 2005, 6:26 PM
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18 Oct 2005, 11:17 PM | ok kool its a bit raunchy and stuff :P so id like feedback Creating fabulous sights..with hands on your thighs... I begin expanding the prize with a plan to surprise... Imagine our lives, just picture perfection in motion... Your fingers rubbing the thick erection with lotion... Stick to sex with emotion, screams and cries of joy... Sighs deploy.. involved in actions you and I enjoy... Our minds employed..thoughts of freaky positions... Physique in condition, crazy techniques and traditions... With the speech of musicians, hearts beat to the sound... Heat will surround, feet on the ground as she turns around... Sheets arent unwound, and our legs tangled in the slack... Secretions dangle to the sack with an angle from the back... Strangling her rack, rubbing her nipples with my fingers... No interruptions, cut the phone lines..crippling the ringers... The tickling will linger, on for days...nights and weeks... Quite unique, moaning so strong she has to fight to speak... Ignite the peak, bed rocking from the orgasmic height... Memorial sex, she keeps talking of the fantastic night.. . Sparking from the evening you wore my jumper in the park... Letters and remarks led me to show u that its better in the dark... What I said to her embarked the opposite of regrets you get... Let sweat prove it..turn fantasy into reality baby and lets do it... |
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4 Apr 2005, 8:39 PM
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| FindWhatIsYet2BeFound HSC: 2004 Gender: Female Location: a place where i call home
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20 Jan 2009, 7:58 PM | hah! i like it...i dont like some parts, but yeah its kinda cool
__________________ "Peace, in the sense of the absence of war, is of little value to someone who is dying of hunger or cold. It will not remove the pain of torture inflicted on a prisoner of conscience. It does not comfort those who have lost their loved ones in floods caused by senseless deforestation in a neighboring country. Peace can only last where human rights are respected, where the people are fed, and where individuals and nations are free." - Dalai Lama |
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4 Apr 2005, 8:42 PM
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6 Jan 2008, 12:17 PM | Quote:
May I suggest you try masturbation? Its a much more effective vehicle through which to vent your powerful sexual feelings and urges | |
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| mrs  HSC: 2004 Gender: Female Location: North Shore
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15 Oct 2006, 12:51 PM | Quote:
__________________ well i talked about it put it on never was it true but its you i fell into | |
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4 Apr 2005, 9:07 PM
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| FindWhatIsYet2BeFound HSC: 2004 Gender: Female Location: a place where i call home
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20 Jan 2009, 7:58 PM | lol, no to be a rap writer, it would have to have "bitch" and "hoe" written SEVERAL more times...
__________________ "Peace, in the sense of the absence of war, is of little value to someone who is dying of hunger or cold. It will not remove the pain of torture inflicted on a prisoner of conscience. It does not comfort those who have lost their loved ones in floods caused by senseless deforestation in a neighboring country. Peace can only last where human rights are respected, where the people are fed, and where individuals and nations are free." - Dalai Lama |
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4 Apr 2005, 10:20 PM
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18 Oct 2005, 11:17 PM |  well i wasnt far off being a rapper, i worked for a company called AON All Or Nothin' Entertainment lol writing songs for shitty rappers, to make it big one came out of the company Baby Bash.. Masturbatingg,,,, hmmm have done that, far prgressed, im into the fucking older women stage,  ohwell u might get there one day, 25 yrs old is my limit or yummy mummies but nah ive got more, |
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4 Apr 2005, 10:52 PM
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| FindWhatIsYet2BeFound HSC: 2004 Gender: Female Location: a place where i call home
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20 Jan 2009, 7:58 PM | ok, now ur just gross
__________________ "Peace, in the sense of the absence of war, is of little value to someone who is dying of hunger or cold. It will not remove the pain of torture inflicted on a prisoner of conscience. It does not comfort those who have lost their loved ones in floods caused by senseless deforestation in a neighboring country. Peace can only last where human rights are respected, where the people are fed, and where individuals and nations are free." - Dalai Lama |
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5 Apr 2005, 5:10 PM
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Today, 9:26 AM  | if you want to post your stuff somewhere check out http://www.fictionpress.com |
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