| Re: Poetry Major Work Titles (it is nearly time)
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Originally Posted by shimmy&shine nice imagery - i really want to read your poetry!
Wasn't yours about family? Like different families? How does that relate at all?
Oh, acutally i get it now, 'branches' and lines', maybe like a family tree - or am I completely off the mark!?
I also like the use of alliteration. It's cool when you see simultaeous use of poetic techniques in just a few words. |
Yes it is a family tree... Correct lol..
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he is the lamb, she is the slaughter, she's moving way to fast and all he wanted was to hold her.
(she fakes a smile and pushes her hips into his). |