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Inspired by the "First Three Words" thread, and created for those of us who like to jump to the last page of a book to see the last word because we're artards. <3
 

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"The scar had not pained Harry for nineteen years. All was well."
 

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At the moment, "I am the walls that surround this story, and I am stronger than ever." But I'm cutting it because it makes me sound like a douchebag I think :)
 

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i am leaking two different endings to my major work to ruin any spoiler attempts mwahaha

EDIT: snap someone beat me to the HP reference :(

the last line of mine is "you have to set yourself on fire."

anyone who can tell me where it comes from gets a cookie
 

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When there's nothing left to burn you have to set yourself on fire?
 

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[FONT=&quot]"The image lingered, and I slept on, forever smiling."

But my story is split into 4 stories, so that's really just the ending to the last story... not really an ending that summarises the whole thing lol.

Eh.
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bethdocker85 said:
[FONT=&quot]"The image lingered, and I slept on, forever smiling."

But my story is split into 4 stories, so that's really just the ending to the last story... not really an ending that summarises the whole thing lol.

Eh.
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"not with a bang, but a whimper"

I know, cliche, but its for a film and its narration, so its sorta alright.
 

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"Finally she could breathe."

it relates back to my title... it might change though it sounds a bit...
 

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I don't have a last line for my major work! My short story ends with drawings :)
 

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" Raindrops ran down the young lover’s face, down his sightless eyes like tears; down the torn paper of the white letter, turning the strong strokes of ink to incoherent streaks of darkness."
 

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:wave: hello Mr. Brightside
mr_brightside said:
Picture tells a thousand words?
pretty much :)

I'm so :D it's almost over! After next Wednesday...no more staying back at school till 5 pm on thursdays!
 
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mr_brightside said:
Picture tells a thousand words?
Careful how many pictures you use. You might go over the word limit. As it stands I am undecided on my last line. I'll post it when I decide :p
 

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PartyAtMothers said:
Careful how many pictures you use. You might go over the word limit. As it stands I am undecided on my last line. I'll post it when I decide :p
I have 13 illustrations throughout my story...the writing where my illustrations are now placed are all gone --- it's 7000 words including the pictures, so im all good :)
 

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‘That the Sun goes early to bed, and that the Moon most always leaves, but the Stars are always there, even if you can’t see them. And you are … my Sun and Moon and Stars.’

Is the last line of mine. Funny thing is, I'm not finished yet. D=
 

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"Rod McArthur had met his other half, and abruptly said goodbye."

And that's the other half of himself. Not a lady (or a man in his case.):mad1:
 

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“Heaven,” he said, almost smiling.

- am editing down the rest of the work, but there's no way the last line is changing :D
 

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