Last Line of your Major Work?

melonkitten · 26 Aug 2008, 3:50 PM

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lorikeet · 26 Aug 2008, 3:54 PM

It's actually a critical piece, not a story:

"Exposing ourselves to a range of frames is as much a part of understanding our own reading as it is of understanding those of others; as we displace ourselves to be positioned into the perspective of another, we are simultaneously set free to look back and examine our own line of sight – an action we would be well to apply to more than just the reading of literature."

It's long, but technically a sentence

morning storm · 26 Aug 2008, 5:57 PM

"Well Ladies and Gentlemen, I'm sure we won't be short of a conversation topic over lunch..."

Lachlandavis · 27 Aug 2008, 8:50 PM

Technically its two lines:

'Click'

'Bang'

settle*precious · 17 Sep 2008, 8:30 AM

"Goodnight sweet prince and angels sing thee to thy rest"

yeeeeeah for shakespeare.

not.addie · 17 Sep 2008, 9:00 PM

All that remained was my mother's garden of lilies.

nirvanafreak02 · 17 Sep 2008, 10:41 PM

"Let’s face it, to the mainstream audience of today nothing is funnier than a fag in drag."

lol sorry, mine was critical response

marcquelle · 19 Sep 2008, 10:54 PM

"fa in drag" got to love "Priscilla: Queen of the Desert"

nirvanafreak02 · 20 Sep 2008, 9:14 AM

lol yeah Priscilla is the best
i put a pic of the 'girls' on my cover page

Zephyrio · 20 Sep 2008, 9:27 AM

"They are free."

'mogen · 4 Oct 2008, 12:09 PM

"Jail might be good for him anyway. Get him clean.”

metalheaven · 13 Nov 2008, 9:40 AM

"and i woke up and it was all a dream"

haha nah

from memory it was something like
"Art is immortal, and the destroyer of silence."

taper-jean-girl · 18 Nov 2008, 10:24 AM

"My artwork: an eclectic portrayal of art before life, and life before death, ‘followed naturally by a pure and effective silence’..."

The last quote bit's from a Yves Klein art manifesto

georgefren · 30 Dec 2008, 5:16 PM

"I'm

very

tired. Dreamchasing isn't easy."

ok thats technically two sentences, and three lines. BUT its all kinda one line(ish) in spirit and it wouldnt make sense if i just gave the last line.

u-borat · 10 Jan 2009, 12:41 AM

blackness swallowed him.

26 Aug 2008, 3:50 PM	#61 (permalink)
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lorikeet New Year's Eve HSC: 2008 Gender: Female Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 73 Last Activity: 29 Oct 2008, 1:12 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? It's actually a critical piece, not a story: "Exposing ourselves to a range of frames is as much a part of understanding our own reading as it is of understanding those of others; as we displace ourselves to be positioned into the perspective of another, we are simultaneously set free to look back and examine our own line of sight – an action we would be well to apply to more than just the reading of literature." It's long, but technically a sentence __________________

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morning storm Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Male Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 140 Last Activity: 16 Mar 2010, 7:13 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "Well Ladies and Gentlemen, I'm sure we won't be short of a conversation topic over lunch..." __________________ 'The world is so exquisite, with so much love and moral depth, that there is no reason to deceive ourselves with pretty stories for which there's little good evidence. Far better, it seems to me, in our vulnerability, is to look Death in the eye and to be grateful every day for the brief but magnificent opportunity that life provides.'

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Lachlandavis New Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Male Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 17 Last Activity: 19 Dec 2008, 9:06 AM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? Technically its two lines: 'Click' 'Bang'

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settle*precious Banned HSC: 2008 Gender: Female Location: Blue Mountainsss. Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 562 Last Activity: 5 Nov 2009, 9:59 AM Blog Entries: 4	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "Goodnight sweet prince and angels sing thee to thy rest" yeeeeeah for shakespeare.

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nirvanafreak02 Senior Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Female Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 328 Last Activity: 19 Feb 2010, 3:59 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "Let’s face it, to the mainstream audience of today nothing is funnier than a fag in drag." lol sorry, mine was critical response Last edited by nirvanafreak02; 17 Sep 2008 at 10:46 PM.

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marcquelle a.k.a. Michael...Hi! HSC: 2009 Gender: Male Location: Jervis Bay, N.S.W. Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,487 Last Activity: 13 Mar 2010, 6:55 PM Blog Entries: 1	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "fa in drag" got to love "Priscilla: Queen of the Desert" __________________ 2010: UoW B. Nursing

20 Sep 2008, 9:14 AM	#69 (permalink)
nirvanafreak02 Senior Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Female Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 328 Last Activity: 19 Feb 2010, 3:59 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? lol yeah Priscilla is the best i put a pic of the 'girls' on my cover page

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Zephyrio Exalted Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Male Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 950 Last Activity: Today, 1:29 AM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "They are free." __________________ MBBS/BA @ UNSW Tutoring offered by UNSW Medicine/Arts student in English (up to 4U), maths, modern history, extension history and chemistry. Drop me a word at lawsonung@gmail.com.

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'mogen New Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Female Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 7 Last Activity: 20 Oct 2009, 2:18 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "Jail might be good for him anyway. Get him clean.” __________________ English- Adv, Ext1, Ext2 Maths- 2U, Ext1 Chemistry Drama SOR 1U Hoping for B Laws/ B Arts or B Comms. 93.55

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metalheaven Assistant Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Male Location: Quakers Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 82 Last Activity: 1 Jan 2009, 5:38 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "and i woke up and it was all a dream" haha nah from memory it was something like "Art is immortal, and the destroyer of silence." __________________ UAI aim: c'mooon early 90s

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taper-jean-girl New Member HSC: 2008 Gender: Female Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 5 Last Activity: 24 Nov 2008, 10:34 AM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "My artwork: an eclectic portrayal of art before life, and life before death, ‘followed naturally by a pure and effective silence’..." The last quote bit's from a Yves Klein art manifesto

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georgefren Senior Member HSC: 2009 Gender: Male Location: Pymble Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 346 Last Activity: 29 Oct 2009, 10:39 PM	Re: Last Line of your Major Work? "I'm very tired. Dreamchasing isn't easy." ok thats technically two sentences, and three lines. BUT its all kinda one line(ish) in spirit and it wouldnt make sense if i just gave the last line.

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