what i have so far for 07..

holden4ever89 · 9 Feb 2007, 11:02 AM

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hi,

i have my theme/concept/research pretty much done and dusted so i figure now is as good time to get some feedback (you have my full permission to be harsh) from some external perspectives.

so, if anyone would mind taking a look at some stuff for me it would be greatly appreciated. Keeping in mind, they are a suite of poems about the shifting balance of power (each poem with an individual image) and as it is yet to be completed this is not fully conveyed, so perhaps each piece should be looked at in an individual light. Oh by the way, i love extension 2 and have no problem with it taking up 99% of my time!!

cheers in advance

**Tulipa** · 11 Feb 2007, 6:50 PM

Hey kiddo.

PM whatever you've got.

I'm doing Creative Writing with an emphasis on poetry at Uni and trying to find some poor EE2 Poets to edit.

I'm a Nazi when it comes to pretty much all the technical aspects of poetry and a Cliche killer

666_blessings · 11 Feb 2007, 8:14 PM

Well if Tulipa is willing to sort out the technical aspects and sort out those pesky cliches, I can have a look at the word choice (because that's all that's really left).

Dave2007 · 11 Feb 2007, 8:46 PM

I have no experience or qualifications as im still doing ee2 myself, but would be happy to give it a read

holden4ever89 · 12 Feb 2007, 8:10 PM

garr, did i mention how awesome you guys are!!

9 Feb 2007, 11:02 AM	#1 (permalink)
holden4ever89 Junior Member HSC: 2007 Gender: Male Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 44 Last Activity: 23 Mar 2008, 3:09 PM	what i have so far for 07.. You can hide this advertisement by registering. hi, i have my theme/concept/research pretty much done and dusted so i figure now is as good time to get some feedback (you have my full permission to be harsh) from some external perspectives. so, if anyone would mind taking a look at some stuff for me it would be greatly appreciated. Keeping in mind, they are a suite of poems about the shifting balance of power (each poem with an individual image) and as it is yet to be completed this is not fully conveyed, so perhaps each piece should be looked at in an individual light. Oh by the way, i love extension 2 and have no problem with it taking up 99% of my time!! cheers in advance

11 Feb 2007, 6:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
Tulipa Loose lips sink ships HSC: 2005 Gender: Female Location: to the left, a little below the right and right in front of the left handed right man Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 3,431 Last Activity: Today, 11:11 AM	Re: what i have so far for 07.. Hey kiddo. PM whatever you've got. I'm doing Creative Writing with an emphasis on poetry at Uni and trying to find some poor EE2 Poets to edit. I'm a Nazi when it comes to pretty much all the technical aspects of poetry and a Cliche killer __________________ *This city is stamped with my memories of you.* http://audiblevodka.tumblr.com/

11 Feb 2007, 8:14 PM	#3 (permalink)
666_blessings Hi! I'm Alan... HSC: 2005 Gender: Male Location: left of the middle Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 667 Last Activity: 12 Oct 2009, 5:54 PM	Re: what i have so far for 07.. Well if Tulipa is willing to sort out the technical aspects and sort out those pesky cliches, I can have a look at the word choice (because that's all that's really left). __________________ If all else fails, eat chocolate.

11 Feb 2007, 8:46 PM	#4 (permalink)
Dave2007 Senior Member HSC: 2007 Gender: Male Location: land of nod Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 286 Last Activity: 11 May 2008, 3:12 PM	Re: what i have so far for 07.. I have no experience or qualifications as im still doing ee2 myself, but would be happy to give it a read __________________

12 Feb 2007, 8:10 PM	#5 (permalink)
holden4ever89 Junior Member HSC: 2007 Gender: Male Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 44 Last Activity: 23 Mar 2008, 3:09 PM	Re: what i have so far for 07.. garr, did i mention how awesome you guys are!!

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