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Old 7 Jul 2007, 4:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey, just wondering if

any poets willing to post some opening lines or maybe even an opening poem??

I started reflection statementing today

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Georgie had a car,
A little car that went.
It had three scratches in the roof,
And in the side a dent.


EDIT: ha this is the EE2 forum...

children's poetry a little innappropriate.
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haha YES!! childrens poetry all the way lol. In fact my opening quote is rather similar:

"All the council signs
and all the council men
couldn't put her
together again"


Opening poem:

"though lust

prepares us for savagery,

it will never prepare us for

life.


the bastard child

of impulse and wish."

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haha YES!! childrens poetry all the way lol. In fact my opening quote is rather similar:

"All the council signs
and all the council men
couldn't put her
together again"


Opening poem:

"though lust
prepares us for savagery,
it will never prepare us for
life.

the bastard child
of impulse and wish."


dramatic.
what's the rest of it about?
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haha, yes "dramatic"...."dramatically poor writing" i think is the correct term

but basically its about two people that hook up, form one massively intense relationship, power struggle occurs, then they die in a car accident

each poem is a roadsign, well based on a road sign if that makes sense

pretty much an excuse for me to write about cars

if you tell me yours is childrens poetry throughout i will marry you right now

yes...boredofstudies first marriage!! honeymoon is AFTER the hsc of course
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lol! can i come to your wedding!

"Who needs a monotone?
When the world is,
Vibrant!
Brimming with hues,
Stretching beyond description"

It sounds really lame out of context tho!
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haha, yes "dramatic"...."dramatically poor writing" i think is the correct term

but basically its about two people that hook up, form one massively intense relationship, power struggle occurs, then they die in a car accident

each poem is a roadsign, well based on a road sign if that makes sense

pretty much an excuse for me to write about cars

if you tell me yours is childrens poetry throughout i will marry you right now

yes...boredofstudies first marriage!! honeymoon is AFTER the hsc of course
haha that's as far as I got.
there are big big plans for it to be children's poetry throughout though.

Damn I wish I could draw...
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