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Old 7 Sep 2008, 3:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Help in the use of Meter

Yes, i think that Tennyson's Charge of the Light Brigade is a sublime poem.

Dimeter, hey? I was thinking possibly tetrameter (just because i'm not sure how much i can say in only 6 syllables!).

Denotes a fall (as in the descent into "the Valley of Death"?). This could be suitable for my theme (which is about the fall of empires).

Thanks for your advice: it has been most insightful
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