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Old 7 Sep 2008, 6:39 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Help in the use of Meter

Yes, I think it connotes a fall. Others might argue.

You can say as much as you'd like if you employ enjambment.
Maybe split every line/sentence across two lines.

If you wanted to keep it orthodox, you could use dactylic hexameter, which Homer used. It's used for epic poems quite a lot.



Oh and also, I'll repeat some advice my teacher gave me concerning Historical Fiction.
Change something about it, don't simply retell the story with pretty words. Take charge and make it innovative. Perhaps a different perspective?
To get top marks it needs to be fresh.

Just some food for thought

Have fun with it!
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