| Re: My poem - love it or hate it ....
good, but needs to be lifted for EX2 standards. read the showcases; thats where you'l need to be by the end =)
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I'll spit in the mouth of a God who whispers in the minds of our children
Set fire to the hive as you flee! It's fiction, a faceless illusion.
HSC 2009: English Extension II, Modern History, General Mathematics, Chemistry
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