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Re: My poem - love it or hate it ....

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Originally Posted by B.O.R.E.D.
As tears crawl down her face
At there very own pace
She thinks with her heart
Only can he unlock it
Or forever shall it be an empty pit

Eyeliner has run , soaky wet skin
As he lays only a finger on her
Thinking to himself as he runs it along
Slowly wrapping his arms around her

Drawing her slowly in
Closely and gracefully they are locked
Just barely by the touch of there skin
Being only shocked
They pull away

One last tear falls to the ground
Only to drown
The last glimps of hope

One grain of sugar
Is too sweet
Only sending her off her feet
One drop of love
Sends her blind
Being only drawn
One day is too long
is this wrong ?

Rainbows flow from her soul
Bringing joy to her heart
Searching and searching
For her witt which is really quiet smart

Raindrops glisen on her cheeks
Making them look like crystals
Slowly she speaks
Wipping the water off her face

She just states
I need my space
Croweds jump out of the way
Walking and wipping that face

Dissappearing into the sun
One boy whispers
Why didnt she run
But it was coming . yet she did not run

The darkness she had feared
Finding herself on a horse
The darkness arising . She just reared
Racing into the dark

One grain of sugar
There is non too sweet
One drop of love
Cant be enough
All she needs is to be held on her two feet
Please, grammar and spelling. GRAMMAR AND SPELLING.
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