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hey guys 4 da creative writing question i cudnt think of a way to relate to the stimulus so i just based my story off text 4 in the first section (i said dis thsi to the marker at d start of my story)

i rote a really really good story about homes and then halfway through i had a masiv inspiretion to talk about a sun flower but obvisly i cudnt turn around and relate to the otha q but lucky 4 me they had a part in text 4 about plants so i used that and then i selebrated it

heres wat i sort of wrote about i cant remember

my names angus, i walk down the road to my home as i walk i think what is a home? i think a home can be

home can be inner city

home can be a suburb

home can be a house

home can be a plant in the garden

(i think there was 1 more home thing i stole these limnes from the text 4 ha)

so i think about my dad

dad knew the city tracks. not just the steps and pathways round the cross but he had a mental picture like a map so he belonged to where ever he is on his map because he knew al about it

then i think about me

my home is footscray. i am happy here (this is where i had my insperation) because i belong with the garden

i have a sun flower in my garden

the sun shines on it like a reflection of my love of it and this makes the sun flowe r grow because of my acceptance

the sun flower is not in the atmosphere of rejection so it grows to be a very very very very big sun flower that is the biggest in the world

because of this a lot of people come to see my sun flower and i make a lot of new friends because of my love of my sun flower but my sun flower will always be my best friend who i feel at home with because as ts eliot said home is where one starts from and my sunflower made me famous for having the biggest sun flower in the world

as i walk close to my house i see a lot of people crowding a round the sun flower to celebrate it and this makes me feel a sense of belonging

THE END

i managed to make the story go for 11 pages of the writing booklet because i crossed things out as i got insperied and then also to make it seem longer

what i want to know is can i stil get full marks for this creative because someone told me that i needed to only answer da q in section 2 but that stupid cuz i said what i was answerng...

apart from this i think i got ful marks (my teacher said my essay was definitly going to be 15) and i answered all the qs in section 1



thank you for your help guys