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Old 6 Nov 2009, 10:08 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: peter skroynecki's 10 mary street & ancestors

Ancestors

Skrzynecki reveals in Ancestors that he is developing a stronger sense of belonging with his family.

Techniques:

Rhetorical questions
  • The series of rhetorical questions dramatises and heightens Peter's sense of urgency to understand his relationship with his ancestors.
Setting
  • The alienating landscape in the setting of 'Mountains' and 'A moonlit plain / Of grasses and sand' enables Peter to clear his mind of complications and focus on his struggle.
Imagery
  • In the first stanza the visual imagery of 'shadows' and 'bearded, faceless men' are ambiguous as the shadows and men have no identity; thus, Peter feels unsatisfied. However, by the fifth stanza, 'their faces become clearer'.
  • Furthermore, Skrzynecki's use of gustatory imagery in the simile 'tongue dry / As caked mud' and in the personification 'wind tastes of blood' emphasises that his dream affects his senses.
  • This progression in imagery, from vague and haunting images to more specific and powerful ones, shows Peter's growing closeness to his ancestors.
Hope that helps!
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