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    Talking ATAR 99.90 | SELLING BAND 6 Essays | Essay Editing | Eng Adv (97), Eng Ext 1 (48)

    Hi Guys, my name is Jared and I am pleased to be offering my services as an essay editor and marker!

    I graduated in 2017 with the following results:

    -ATAR of 99.90
    -English Advanced HSC mark of 97/100
    -English Extension 1 HSC mark of 48/50
    -English Extension 2 HSC mark of 47/50 (49/50 externally)
    -Modern History HSC mark of 94/100
    -Mathematics Extension 1 mark of 100/100 (10th in State)
    -Ranked first internally in English Advanced, English Extension 1, and Modern History in a school that ranked in the top 15 schools in the state overall andranked in the top 3 schools in English.
    -Graduated DUX of my school


    If you are sending your essay to me online, I promise to provide you with comprehensive feedback (i.e. at least half a page + exhaustive annotations) in the style of what was given to me and what you can expect from HSC markers to help achieve your HSC goals. This will include:

    - Thorough line-by-line annotations on how to improve language, sentence flow, techniques, and argument
    - A comprehensive comment up to a few hundred words at the end of each paragraph to help ameliorate argument and general structure, I will also pinpoint your strengths and weaknesses with tangible advice on how to accentuate these strengths and diminish the weaknesses
    - A final comment at the end of the essay up to a few hundred words providing advice on how to improve in terms of argument, language, and structure, including an analysis of your ideas and concepts
    - A mark out of 15, 20, or 25 depending on the essay/creative


    The pricing is as follows:

    ***REDUCED PRICES***

    - English Advanced Essay (800-1200 words) =$30$25
    - English Extension 1 Essay (1200-1800 words) =$35$30
    - English Extension 2 = Negotiable prices
    - English Advanced Creative (700-1200 words) =$25$20
    - English Extension 1 Creative (1000-1500 words) =$30$25
    - Modern History Essay (800-1200 words) =$25$15

    MORE DISCOUNTS AVAILABLE!

    NEW OFFER: You can add one of my essays to an edit of an equivalent essay for $4.99 extra!!


    I am also selling my essays and creatives in English and Modern History: [ATTACHED ARE SAMPLES FROM ALL THE ESSAYS + TECHNIQUES LIST I USED FOR COMPREHENSION!!!]

    - Module A (1984/Metropolis):

    Achieved full marks internally and 17.5/20 in the HSC exam.

    - Module B (Hamlet):

    Achieved full marks internally and 20/20 in the HSC exam.

    - Module C (Judith Wright poetry):

    Achieved 19/20 internally and 18.5/20 in the HSC exam.

    - Discovery Essay (The Motorcycle Diaries):

    Achieved full marks internally and 15/15 in the HSC exam.

    - Discovery Creative:

    Achieved 13/15 internally and 14.5/15 in the HSC exam.

    - Navigating the Global Essay (White Tiger + Lost in Translation):

    Achieved full marks internally and 24.5/25 in the HSC exam.

    - English Extension 2 Critical Response:

    Achieved full marks internally and 49/50 in the HSC exam.

    - Modern History (Collection of essays (up to 10 individual essays) on USA 1919-1941, J. Edgar Hoover, and Cold War):

    Achieved 24+/25 internally.


    Pricing:

    Any 1 Module Essay = $20
    Any 2 Modules Essays = $35
    Modules Pack (All Modules Essays) = $35
    Discovery Essay = $20
    Discovery Creative = $15
    Discovery Pack = $25
    English Advanced Pack = $40
    English Extension 1 Essay = $25
    English Extension 2 Essay = FREE
    English Pack = $50
    Any 1 Modern History Topic = $15
    Any 2 Modern History Topics = $25
    Modern History Pack (All Topics) = $25


    If you are still unsure, email me on jaredlevy7777@gmail.com if you need more info on prices, clarification of marks, or to ask any other questions.

    All the best for the year ahead!!
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    Re: ATAR 99.90 | SELLING BAND 6 Essays | Essay Editing | Eng Adv (97), Eng Ext 1 (48)

    I actually know Jared, he was a truly fantastic english student and tutor to me. He helped me so much with his expert editing skills in the crucial later stages of the HSC and trial exams. After Pre-trials I did terribly in the discovery and modules sections and was convinced I was screwed. That's when I asked Jared for some advice. He put me right on track, gave me invaluable tips that were easy to execute but super effective. He was conceptually excellent and techically brilliant. I reworked my essays with his help, and achieved great marks in trials, and even better in HSC. In the end, I pulled off a 96 in advanced and 47 in 3U! I cannot recommend him enough. I can wholeheartedly guarantee he will dramatically improve your marks. He is also very nice and a great guy overall.

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    Re: ATAR 99.90 | SELLING BAND 6 Essays | Essay Editing | Eng Adv (97), Eng Ext 1 (48)

    Thanks so much Ez - means a lot, it was my pleasure to help! More spots available - get in quick!!
    Last edited by maths314; 20 Apr 2018 at 4:03 PM.

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    Re: ATAR 99.90 | SELLING BAND 6 Essays | Essay Editing | Eng Adv (97), Eng Ext 1 (48)

    BUMP!! Only a few spots left for essay marking! Further reduction in prices available for multiple orders
    SELLING ESSAYS + EDITING & MARKING!


    2017 HSC: // English Adv (97) // English Ext 1 (48) // English Ext 2 (47) // Modern History (94) // Phys (93)
    // 3U Maths (100) // 4U Maths (94)
    ATAR: 99.90
    10th in State 3U Maths

    Click here! http://community.boredofstudies.org/...xt-1-48-a.html

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