Tios for interesting writing? (1 Viewer)

TheHSCLifeChoseMe

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こにちはみなさん、今日WRITINGについて話したいです。

I've handed in a few writing pieces for my teacher to mark, she says that my writing is good however - it does not really answer the question (ie. I blabber on about nothing) and furthermore it is a bit bland.

I've improved on trying to remain focused on the question, however most pieces I hand in are boring apparently.

What would you suggest for me to include in my writing?

Note : I am currently learning year 12 Japanese beginners. Also by writing I am referring to the HSC paper writing sections.

Thanks :)
 

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Write about something from every topic.
If you can.

Write the dates, about your family, about your pets, neighbour hood, rooms, what you do in a day.
And try to make use of the more complex phrases/tenses
 

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