Someone mark my creative writing! (1 Viewer)

sorethroat

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ok so i got great marks for this (15/15) in my trials but my teacher said its kinda risky...
the marks will depend on the marker only b/c its kind of a weird, sci-fi-ish kinda story where some might not 'get it'

can someone (preferably post 08 HSC) please take a look at it and give me their opinion? post a reply and ill pm with my story

Oh, and i know there's room for improvement so any constructive criticism is welcomed!
 

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