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mine, in a nutshell, was:

lee's parents were on holidays in israel
they both got shot in the head by extremists..dunno what kind of extremists, but they were extreme :) yes i generalised a lot in this part
then he was waiting for a phonecall from 'israel hospital' to find out how they were
he got a call from dr kahn saying the bullets were removed and they were fine, then dr kahn hung up
then lee fainted
then he woke up and it was all a dream. hahaha
yes i was pressed for time :(
 

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gella said:
mine, in a nutshell, was:

lee's parents were on holidays in israel
they both got shot in the head by extremists..dunno what kind of extremists, but they were extreme :) yes i generalised a lot in this part
then he was waiting for a phonecall from 'israel hospital' to find out how they were
he got a call from dr kahn saying the bullets were removed and they were fine, then dr kahn hung up
then lee fainted
then he woke up and it was all a dream. hahaha
yes i was pressed for time :(
do you by any chance go to all saints?

yeah i rushed my shit too haha.. the only dialogue in my story was 'Mum! get me some water!'

=|
 

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nuh, good samaritan :p you?
yeah, my ending was so..lame? haha
 

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gella said:
nuh, good samaritan :p you?
yeah, my ending was so..lame? haha
hahah so you know Dastin?

lololol i go to mt. carmel in Campbelltown

lol my ending was the starting sentence.. tried to pull of one of those witty endings.. didnt think it worked.. oh well

well yeah Dastin is like one of my best mates not really but yeah.. we're cool :cool:
 

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Basically mine was
Lee waits for his gf to call
paces arounf the house
the phone rings.
its a telemarketer
he wants to call her but doesnt; thinks he sounds desperate
gets a text saying HELP from gf
drives to her house
knocks the door in, is confonted by guy on steroids with hammer
proceeds to punch him in throat
goes to girlfriedns bedroom and hugs her
she pulls out a knife and stabs him
the end.
 

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I think that most people used the 'Lee waited for the phone to ring'.
 

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theEXIT said:
Basically mine was
Lee waits for his gf to call
paces arounf the house
the phone rings.
its a telemarketer
he wants to call her but doesnt; thinks he sounds desperate
gets a text saying HELP from gf
drives to her house
knocks the door in, is confonted by guy on steroids with hammer
proceeds to punch him in throat
goes to girlfriedns bedroom and hugs her
she pulls out a knife and stabs him
the end.
lol. 0.0

evil much? dw its still cool. but wow. throat stabbing... i diggz :cool:
 

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HAHAHA yeah i know dastin, he's in most of my classes! lol small world jeez
 

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gella said:
HAHAHA yeah i know dastin, he's in most of my classes! lol small world jeez
hahah i reckon ayye.. yeah ask him tomorrow if he knows dillon.. he'll have some good stories about me.. ;) lol. very very small world
 

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AnthonyPhoenix said:
I put the high wall and iron bars one.
LOTS of people in my school put the iron bars or the dark street one.
 

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nah, no one feel bad..
mine ended with the protagonist somehow turning into wood..T_T
 

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Mine was about how he was waiting for his imaginary friend to call... ahe. He was in love with his imaginary friend called Nobody. That sounds quite horrible in hindsight...
 

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Jusskah said:
Mine was about how he was waiting for his imaginary friend to call... ahe. He was in love with his imaginary friend called Nobody. That sounds quite horrible in hindsight...
thats coool!!!
in a weird way
id be concerned
go see a councellor :p
 

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lol i was halfway through mine...wen the old, wrinkly person runnin the exam came and stopped me from writing
ARGH lol!
 

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