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    Psychology Essay

    Don't know if there's already a thread about it, so I apologize in advance if there is.

    Has anyone started/finished the Psychology essay, or is there anyone who've already done 1st year Psychology willing to help out a 1st year Psychology-newbie ?

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    No-one's going to do the essay for you or give you copies of their old ones, but if you have a specific question, post it and we'll see if we can help. Just saying 'can you give help plz?' without stating where or how you need the help is a little bit useless.

    As it happens, at least half a dozen of us have done psych so you're in the right place.


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    Re: Psychology Essay

    I wasn't asking anyone to 'do my essay for me.'
    I was just in need of someone to help me start my essay (i.e. give me pointers for the introduction) as I've no idea how to start a university essay (APA format) =S

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    A few pointers:

    1) If you could post the question, it would help.

    2) APA format refers to the referencing structure used. It doesn't really affect how the essay is actually written.
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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Sorry about that, here's the question

    Perilloux, Easton, and Buss (2012) investigated sex differences in the perception of
    sexual interest and claim to have found support for a short‐term mating strategy in men
    with evolutionary origins. Are their claims and conclusions justified by their findings?

    Starter Reference
    Perilloux, C., Easton, J., & Buss, D. (2012). The misperception of sexual interest.
    Psychological Science, 23(2), pp,146‐151.

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    i'm doing that one too! XD just wondering, is it ok if our sources are just mainly peer reviewed journals or should we have other publications as well? and how can we find other sources besides using psychINFO?

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by pokka View Post
    i'm doing that one too! XD just wondering, is it ok if our sources are just mainly peer reviewed journals or should we have other publications as well? and how can we find other sources besides using psychINFO?
    I usually just use the Summon system on our library's website.
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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Guess I'm not the only one that's lost haha.
    I thought we were only supposed to use psychINFO for our resources/references ?

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by gettinbetter View Post
    I wasn't asking anyone to 'do my essay for me.'
    I was just in need of someone to help me start my essay (i.e. give me pointers for the introduction) as I've no idea how to start a university essay (APA format) =S
    Get yourself a copy of Burton - An Interactive Approach to Writing Essays and Reports in Psychology, or similar (Caleb would have suggested it at the start of sem). It's a book that goes through each step of the essay and reports (useful for second sem), and gives examples. Also details all APA referencing. You can pick up a copy at coop or second hand for about $30 and it's definitely worth it. Additionally, the library has several copies in the short loan section.

    Quote Originally Posted by gettinbetter View Post
    Sorry about that, here's the question

    Perilloux, Easton, and Buss (2012) investigated sex differences in the perception of
    sexual interest and claim to have found support for a short‐term mating strategy in men
    with evolutionary origins. Are their claims and conclusions justified by their findings?

    Starter Reference
    Perilloux, C., Easton, J., & Buss, D. (2012). The misperception of sexual interest.
    Psychological Science, 23(2), pp,146‐151.
    Read the starter reference and in the end, it should have a whole heap of references used. Look at those, see if any of them are useful, they might lead you to new places.

    Quote Originally Posted by pokka View Post
    i'm doing that one too! XD just wondering, is it ok if our sources are just mainly peer reviewed journals or should we have other publications as well? and how can we find other sources besides using psychINFO?
    PsychINFO is most definitely the best place and best source. It will take you to a whole heap of different journals and give you quite a comprehensive view of the issue. Everyone likes peer reviewed articles because they show that people have checked over the research and methodology and found it to be good. In terms of finding information apart from using psychINFO, do as I suggested above and look at the reference lists at the conclusion of articles.


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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Suede View Post
    PsychINFO is most definitely the best place and best source. It will take you to a whole heap of different journals and give you quite a comprehensive view of the issue. Everyone likes peer reviewed articles because they show that people have checked over the research and methodology and found it to be good. In terms of finding information apart from using psychINFO, do as I suggested above and look at the reference lists at the conclusion of articles.
    Ok then

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    In general whenever I'm writing an essay outside of an exam, I leave the introduction till last. It's inevitable that my opinion will change whilst I'm writing the body of the essay, so my introduction will always end up being modified at some point.

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by jetblack2007 View Post
    In general whenever I'm writing an essay outside of an exam, I leave the introduction till last. It's inevitable that my opinion will change whilst I'm writing the body of the essay, so my introduction will always end up being modified at some point.
    I like this.

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Here you go:



    Use that as your bible.

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by JRock View Post
    Here you go:



    Use that as your bible.
    Where did you get this from ?

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    The aforementioned book:

    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Suede View Post
    Get yourself a copy of Burton - An Interactive Approach to Writing Essays and Reports in Psychology, or similar (Caleb would have suggested it at the start of sem). It's a book that goes through each step of the essay and reports (useful for second sem), and gives examples. Also details all APA referencing. You can pick up a copy at coop or second hand for about $30 and it's definitely worth it. Additionally, the library has several copies in the short loan section.

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Okay, thanks JRock.
    BTW, this might sound stupid but I just need clarification...
    Do we need to talk about the study in our essay ?

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by gettinbetter View Post
    Okay, thanks JRock.
    BTW, this might sound stupid but I just need clarification...
    Do we need to talk about the study in our essay ?
    That's the point of the essay: to critique the study and show through the use of other's findings whether the results are justified. It's a massive yes.
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    Re: Psychology Essay

    ok so im confused. ive written my draught essay and im pretty sure its wrong.

    i dont exactly understand how to 'approach' the question, do we just link the discussion to the results because it says "are their claims and conclusions justified by their findings?" and if thats what we are suppose to do, how do we include other references?
    my draught essay is all over the place and i dont know how to fix it :/

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Quote Originally Posted by ruffshod View Post
    ok so im confused. ive written my draught essay and im pretty sure its wrong.

    i dont exactly understand how to 'approach' the question, do we just link the discussion to the results because it says "are their claims and conclusions justified by their findings?" and if thats what we are suppose to do, how do we include other references?
    my draught essay is all over the place and i dont know how to fix it :/
    When's the essay due? You can send me your draft if you like and I'll make some suggestions


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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Ok so if the question is:
    Perilloux, Easton, and Buss (2012) investigated sex differences in the perception of sexual interest and claim to have found support for a short‐term mating strategy in men with evolutionary origins. Are their claims and conclusions justified by their findings?

    ...then should i focus more on talking about the sexual interest or the short-term mating strategy in men in the essay?

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    Omg mines due tommorow ! I'm so screwed. I started like 3 weeks ago but my essay still sounds nonsense

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    You should focus on exactly what they say: whether the findings justify their conclusions.

    Look at each technique/experiment they use to test their hypothesis and decide whether it supports their final claims. This isn't black and white - sometimes a result can hint at a conclusion without actually definitively proving the truth of that conclusion.

    If you see a gap in logic, then you should point that out too.

    If you think that something wasn't done and it should have been done, then you can tell them that.

    I'm assuming Perilloux, Easton and Buss (2012) is an experimental paper. If it isn't then my advice is useless.

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    Re: Psychology Essay

    ok thanks, i got a little confused there for a moment :S

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