Reply With QuoteAt the moment "Hello fellow desperate..."
I feel it could change, there is quite a bit of malice in my first sentence which I'm still not sure about.
First Three Words of your MW (Just 'Cause)
Just for curiosity's sake, and for an exercise requiring little exertion of the cranium (I am currently very very bored), post up the first three words of your MW,
Mine is:
It is said
(Wow, how utterly unimpressive)
"Through mountains and over seas
Through misery and disease.
A spectator, I played my part
But nothing could move this heart.
Until I held the boys hand
The little one spoke like a man
He showed me death, said
This is how you know, you're alive:
You'll rise above the sea of doubts
Into a world full of clouds."
(Azure Ray - Sea Of Doubts)
At the moment "Hello fellow desperate..."
I feel it could change, there is quite a bit of malice in my first sentence which I'm still not sure about.
"The same as if a tree falls in the forest and no one is there to hear it, you realize, if no one had been there to witness the agony of Christ, would we be saved?"
"And if Christ had died from a barbituate overdose, alone on the bathroom floor, would He be in heaven?"
"The acrid smell"
Just followed the old principle to start a novel off with something from your senses
"All lands on..."
B Arts @ Sydney:
Linguistics,
Music,
Modern Greek.
Dip Ancient Lang @ Macquarie:
Ancient Greek & Coptic.
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They're just bitter they weren't good enough to get into USYD.
"Hey! What does..."
Last edited by glitterfairy; 20 Jan 2005 at 11:24 PM.
"You STUPID BRAT!!"
heh heh damnit... im considering changing it.. it might not be eye-catching enough
Mine starts with a quote which is "what shall we"
and the first words ive written are "the night was"
damn boring script
"extreme close up"
of dialogue it will be
"Oy! wake up" or "The difference between" depending on if i have a monologue or not
Quote or Song.. haven't decided
"And you are?"
UAI: BETTER THAN MEEEEEEE WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
At a glance,
I have just returned from a party of which I was the life and soul; witty banter flowed from my lips, everyone laughed and admired me - but I came away, indeed that dash should be as long as the radii of the earth's orbit wanting to shoot myself.
- S. Kierkegaard
Quote: 'Weep not for'
First three words from the:
1. Preludes
' Thanatos n. Death is'
2. Prose
'Death must be'
3. Poetry
'Helios' steeds' sweeping'
The structure of my major work is a little bit...intricate, so there are other words which come earlier (eg. One - Ripe; Karina; Kore) which I didn't include in the 'first three words' count.
You unpeel.
Shed like scales
the skin’s memory of itself.
.
I see you are going quite Greek. I approve.
B Arts @ Sydney:
Linguistics,
Music,
Modern Greek.
Dip Ancient Lang @ Macquarie:
Ancient Greek & Coptic.
They're just bitter they weren't good enough to get into USYD.
My major work was centred around a Greek Myth.
Last edited by picaresque; 23 Jan 2005 at 2:25 PM.
You unpeel.
Shed like scales
the skin’s memory of itself.
.
um
at the mo I have a quote from Henry James
and
'In your cultured...'
Prolly starts with a quote.. "in the end..."
um actual thing would be somethin along the lines of "What came next?"
"I think we...."
sure to change though.
throw the beauty on the fire
"...and if magic..."
Too late to change.
muahaha thats it Justin... tease Evan
"I once asked"
i'm doin mine in the form of letters with stories woven into it, so its got a reminiscent feel to it...
Last edited by Tulipa; 3 Feb 2005 at 8:46 PM. Reason: wrong spelling
"Behold! Witness and..."
mine seems a little bland
"Three days ago..."
however the nest two words are interesting!!!
I believe...
That my life's going to see...
The love I give...
Returned to me...
my first three words: The light streamed...
However I wont leave you with that, I'll give you the first sentence:
The light streamed down gracefully in golden flecks, refracting on the frosted windows.
i haven't written mine yet
kissed all the pretty girls
"In the year..."
^_^
"Once1 upon a.."
I'm very original.
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