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    Estimate atar to final atar jumps

    I think it is possible when I look at atar calculators as by focusing on your weakest subjects you can boost your average mark fairly significantly.
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    Can anyone mark my essay? (give advices and tell me where I did good)

    All good - I wish you the best of luck with your essay and everything.
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    Can anyone mark my essay? (give advices and tell me where I did good)

    Also, your structure is confusing. Much better to just have three paragraphs = one issue per paragraph. So this would look like. 1. Same-sex relationships. (275-300 words for all) 2. Surrogacy and birth technologies 3. Adoption. And these each should have at least 3 -4 parts of evidence with a...
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    Can anyone mark my essay? (give advices and tell me where I did good)

    This isnt really an introduction as you need to establish what your argument is for each issue. For example, with "same-sex relationships", you are arguing that the legal responses have been effective so state that in your intro. Your intro should be structured more like this: Thesis (1...
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    SOR II - Buddhism Assignment - Need Help!

    oh dear matt good luck man
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    SOR II - Buddhism Assignment - Need Help!

    Hey, Would anyone be able to offer me feedback on my draft for my SOR assignment its due tomorrow! Thanks for any replies.
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    SOR II - Buddhism Assignment

    thanks for the advice will do
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    SOR II - Buddhism Assignment

    Hey, Would anyone be able to offer me feedback on my draft for my SOR assignment. Thanks for any replies.
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    SOR II: Buddhism Assignment

    Hey everyone, I was wondering if you had any advice on how to approach a Buddhism research task where the question is: "To what extent does Buddhism guide adherents to 'train others'?" The source provided is: “One should do what one teaches about others to do; if one would train others, one...
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    Help with legal studies essay - issues affecting shelter.

    Hey everyone, I have to write a shelter essay to the question “Evaluate the effectiveness of the law in dealing with issues related to affordability, discrimination and social housing". Currently, I am 188 words over the 1200 word limit so any feedback on improving the response as well as what...
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    Atar Estimate

    My school is competitive and everyone was already trying
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    Work Experience in the Legal Profession

    Hey everyone, I just recently entered year 12 and I am searching for some work experience. I want to study Law at university and after that I plan on becoming a barrister (criminal probably). Because of this, I want to have work experience in a court or criminal law firm - but I am having...
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    $50K Psychology Scholarship at Macquarie vs Psychology at USYD

    Thanks for the reply - well done on your results and the scholarship! Were you a school captain/school leader?
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    $50K Psychology Scholarship at Macquarie vs Psychology at USYD

    Was that the Leaders Scholarship? If you don’t mind me asking what ranks did you get (and what is your school rank) for the year 11 scores to get that? That is if it is the one I am thinking of...
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