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    Is my short story any good?

    hey thanks, i actually didn't mean to put it int he physical journeys thing... its not supposed to be a physical journey.. haha if it is i'm screwed. but thanks
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    Is my short story any good?

    hey guys, would people be able to help me, i have absolutely no idea if my short story is any good. if i could get some critique it would be great... and hopefully before friday
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