I get called weird all the time. Then again, I play it up.
I like the fact that I can pass my species and nature (if holding an everstone) onto the next generation. Then again, I can't pass on my moveset, which is a shame.
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"The only way to advance to higher levels is to win the round; level 8 is achieved by winning level 7 three times."
This is why I was confused.
Edit: I wasn't sure whether level 8 was my delusion.
cbf looking at the other threads.
When was the last time you did a defrag? What programs operate on start up?
etc.
If you have a cheapish laptop, you need to keep it nice and clean.
You don't need to have numbers in there. Try to create a potent image, it will support the rest of your work.
Use your own unique point of view to create something.
Second sentence needs a little work. Also, it's 'metres' in Australia.
I would suggest removing the measurements, and substituting it with things that mean something visually and spacially. Try describing it to someone who doesn't understand what a metre is.
But it's pretty good.
And your teacher will get sick of seeing the same analysis thirty times over. If you pick out something a bit different, it's refreshing.
Not to mention that when you are doing the exams, the markers will have seen 300 papers before yours.
You have a tendency to use passive sentences. These sound cold, and too many will repel the reader.
Try cutting it all down so that you're giving the reader the benefit of the doubt. I understand that you want your words - to reach the word limit - but it's better to have something amazing...
Seriously, work out what you want to talk about. Find the relevant parts of the book. Write you speech. Speak.
It's not that hard to do your own work. And you can't just use someone else's notes in university. Learn to think for yourself.