Best way to refine writing? (1 Viewer)

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I need to shorten and refine a speech I have to do next week, anybody got some tips for making it better?

 

[Jaxxnuts]

I need to shorten and refine a speech I have to do next week, anybody got some tips for making it better?

Speeches are more about quality over quantity. It is also crucial that you are using concise language in order to maintain the "quality" of the speech

Look at some sample good speeches by past HSC student and see if the way language is used in those speeches matches yours