consumers essay (1 Viewer)

[Samie_Loo]

in the hsc consumers essay wat are they expecting from us? all my practice essays keep getting 22 or 23 ... wat should be intergral parts in this essay... maybe im missing sumthing...

 

[goan_crazy]

Answer the question
talk about info u know
use LCMD to back it up
Evaluation of the effectiveness

thats gotten me 25 in the trial consumers q.

 

[manifestation]

22/23 is great, remember your practice essays are marked harder because you have had time to edit them etc etc. But the actual exam answer will be marked as a first draft and like exam pressure will be taken into account. (well that's what my teacher said) and i am sure if you are getting 22/23's you will probably hit a 24/25 in the exam...so i think you don't need to worry

Like goan_crazy said you need to to more of what the key word says eg. evaluate, assess, etc. So just keep doing that throughout your essay and that may help too.

GOOD LUCK!