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noworriez1

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Based solely on my idea

would u say it is original/would grab the markers attention?

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The speaker is reflecting on a potograph of pre-bombed Hirsohima.

He reflects on how his identity was so entwined by the beauty of its landscape and how it formed the basis for his relationship with his wife and their connection.

After the bombing, his memories of beauty have been replaced with anguish and sorry as he laments how he can never revisit it as it once was.

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Its hard to judge without the actual story, i know..

but based solely off that, impressions?
 

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self-ban

didnt wanna msg to the guys @ 'non-school'

so prohibited myself
i don't understand what you're saying in this^^^, but I think your story has a good original idea! Are you using something similar for bomb creative? It's hard to say without the actual story but it uses a remembered place AND a transition which is +++ so 13+
 

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i don't understand what you're saying in this^^^, but I think your story has a good original idea! Are you using something similar for bomb creative? It's hard to say without the actual story but it uses a remembered place AND a transition which is +++ so 13+
lol its cryptic

'bomb creative?' ??

i didnt really use a 'transition' per-se
it was all just in first-person with a reflective tone
 

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lol its cryptic

'bomb creative?' ??

i didnt really use a 'transition' per-se
it was all just in first-person with a reflective tone
it's a transition illustrated through memory. the bomb creative is the after the bomb creative writing task, can you also translate what you said before about the msg to 'non-school'(?????)
 

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for extension?
ohh

doing sci-fi so cant mould the story in :'(

what topic r u doing?

and there is a 'non-school' section of the website
and i wanted a new account to prohibit myself from messaging ther
 

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ohh

doing sci-fi so cant mould the story in :'(

what topic r u doing?

and there is a 'non-school' section of the website
and i wanted a new account to prohibit myself from messaging ther
it seems obvious now that you say it but I had no clue what you were talking about with non-school (i thought it was the name of your school???) lol
i am doing after the bomb and my story is about the world blowing up and then there being some people left over haha X_X
 

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it seems obvious now that you say it but I had no clue what you were talking about with non-school (i thought it was the name of your school???) lol
i am doing after the bomb and my story is about the world blowing up and then there being some people left over haha X_X
oh lol

aww sounds like a mad topic!

i can do a bomb one too, but it has to be blowing up the deathstar or something in space (lol)
 

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Based solely on my idea

would u say it is original/would grab the markers attention?

Summary:
The speaker is reflecting on a potograph of pre-bombed Hirsohima.

He reflects on how his identity was so entwined by the beauty of its landscape and how it formed the basis for his relationship with his wife and their connection.

After the bombing, his memories of beauty have been replaced with anguish and sorry as he laments how he can never revisit it as it once was.

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Its hard to judge without the actual story, i know..

but based solely off that, impressions?
Love the idea :3
 

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That's p cool idea, if you've executed it well I'm sure you'll get 14-15 :)
Markers are gonna think I'm a terrorist coz my protagonist is a Taliban :eek:
 

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Its an interesting idea, however you need to make sure that you don't overdo the emotions, a lot of try-hards at HSC level make really depressing stories so you need to distinguish yourself from the crowd.
 

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Its an interesting idea, however you need to make sure that you don't overdo the emotions, a lot of try-hards at HSC level make really depressing stories so you need to distinguish yourself from the crowd.
agree
 

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Based solely on my idea

would u say it is original/would grab the markers attention?

Summary:
The speaker is reflecting on a potograph of pre-bombed Hirsohima.

He reflects on how his identity was so entwined by the beauty of its landscape and how it formed the basis for his relationship with his wife and their connection.

After the bombing, his memories of beauty have been replaced with anguish and sorry as he laments how he can never revisit it as it once was.

--
Its hard to judge without the actual story, i know..

but based solely off that, impressions?
Itz fucking shit bra to emotional and shit u think the markers give a fuck? u read mine and we both know mine would kill that so leggo

EDIT: itz also cliched as fuark every azn ganga on this forum will write about that gay shit
 
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