aphorae
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- HSC
- 2011
- Uni Grad
- 2017
I graduated last year with a HSC mark of 98 in English Advanced and am currently undertaking a Commerce/Law degree at UNSW.
Extensive essay/creative editing and feedback service (online):
I am offering to edit and provide extensive feedback on essays (as well as creatives), including follow-up questions and additional requested feedback on certain sections if you require it. I have marked dozens of essays and creatives from a wide range of students of many levels and different schools, ranging from top students at JRAHS and Baulko, to Band 4-5 students simply aiming for a higher band.
The creative and essays I prepared during my HSC were carefully written, extensively refined and perfected over the year – they are all concise, sophisticated and heavily rubric-focused. Furthermore, all my essays contain a range of sophisticated and uncommonly used techniques, with most sourced simply from my own analysis of the text, rather than from teachers, tutors or guides. Hence I can help you achieve either a similarly styled essay, or one suited to your level.
Samples:
One: http://bit.ly/TRFzCm - hesitant 14/15
Two: http://bit.ly/PbuHMO - estimated mid-Band 5
Three: http://bit.ly/UJu8Mw - estimated 18/20
Length and structure of feedback will be tailored to your essay. The most I have ever written is about 1500, and the least, 400. I also provide free advice regarding the overall paper itself, studying for English or other subjects, and writing essays in general if you ask.
Essays:
I will provide extensive editing (tracked changes + insertion of comments) and correct errors relevant to grammar, expression and so on.
I will also give comprehensive feedback (1-2 pages) covering:
Creatives:
Again, I will extensively edit, and correct errors relevant to grammar, expression and so on.
I will give also comprehensive feedback covering:
Contact:
You can PM me or email me at aphorae@hotmail.com for details regarding purchases, rates and requests for samples.
Replies to posts on this board will probably be slower, so do email for the quickest response rate.
Note:
Selling English Advanced essays I used in trials/HSC:
http://community.boredofstudies.org/showthread.php?t=290216
Tutoring services:
http://community.boredofstudies.org/showthread.php?t=290215
Extensive essay/creative editing and feedback service (online):
I am offering to edit and provide extensive feedback on essays (as well as creatives), including follow-up questions and additional requested feedback on certain sections if you require it. I have marked dozens of essays and creatives from a wide range of students of many levels and different schools, ranging from top students at JRAHS and Baulko, to Band 4-5 students simply aiming for a higher band.
The creative and essays I prepared during my HSC were carefully written, extensively refined and perfected over the year – they are all concise, sophisticated and heavily rubric-focused. Furthermore, all my essays contain a range of sophisticated and uncommonly used techniques, with most sourced simply from my own analysis of the text, rather than from teachers, tutors or guides. Hence I can help you achieve either a similarly styled essay, or one suited to your level.
Samples:
One: http://bit.ly/TRFzCm - hesitant 14/15
Two: http://bit.ly/PbuHMO - estimated mid-Band 5
Three: http://bit.ly/UJu8Mw - estimated 18/20
Length and structure of feedback will be tailored to your essay. The most I have ever written is about 1500, and the least, 400. I also provide free advice regarding the overall paper itself, studying for English or other subjects, and writing essays in general if you ask.
Essays:
I will provide extensive editing (tracked changes + insertion of comments) and correct errors relevant to grammar, expression and so on.
I will also give comprehensive feedback (1-2 pages) covering:
- Thematic concerns and discussion of ideas
- Relevance and sophistication of techniques and analysis
- Strength and sophistication of thesis
- Structural and overall coherency
- Grammatical and other errors
- Satisfaction of the marking criteria
- Contextual information if relevant
Creatives:
Again, I will extensively edit, and correct errors relevant to grammar, expression and so on.
I will give also comprehensive feedback covering:
- Complexity, relevance and adaptability of ideas
- Sophistication of language and appropriate language style
- Structural and overall coherency
- Originality and engagement factor
- Grammatical and other errors
- Satisfaction of the marking criteria
- Other suggestions or elements for improvement
Contact:
You can PM me or email me at aphorae@hotmail.com for details regarding purchases, rates and requests for samples.
Replies to posts on this board will probably be slower, so do email for the quickest response rate.
Note:
Selling English Advanced essays I used in trials/HSC:
http://community.boredofstudies.org/showthread.php?t=290216
Tutoring services:
http://community.boredofstudies.org/showthread.php?t=290215
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