history extension major work. (1 Viewer)

[extraordinary07]

hello fellow ex. students. i have completed a first draft for my history ex. major work. It is on General Custer and the Battle of Little Big Horn.

Anyway i like to have more than one opinion when i review work, so i would be very grateful if any of you was to look over or even mark my work.

Cheers.

 

[ari89]

Aren't part of the requirements a peer review?

 

[extraordinary07]

Aren't part of the requirements a peer review?

well i dont know what you mean but if you could give me feedback that would be much obliged.

 

[bored6]

hello fellow ex. students. i have completed a first draft for my history ex. major work. It is on General Custer and the Battle of Little Big Horn.

Anyway i like to have more than one opinion when i review work, so i would be very grateful if any of you was to look over or even mark my work.

Cheers.

Not a bad read. There are several significant flaws however. I'll discuss on Monday.

 

[ari89]

well i dont know what you mean but if you could give me feedback that would be much obliged.

Peer review as in others in your class evaluate your work so far. (It might have just been my school but they did speak about it as it were a requirement.)

 

[extraordinary07]

Not a bad read. There are several significant flaws however. I'll discuss on Monday.

yeah i found some, but for a first draft its okay.

lol i promise not to use emotive language lol

 

[bored6]

yeah i found some, but for a first draft its okay.

lol i promise not to use emotive language lol

Oh ho-ho-ho.

 

[extraordinary07]

Oh ho-ho-ho.

yes, christmas comes early for those who work number 6

i want to see yours i really do

i am keen as you are the only competition

oggie is a mere obstruction, i grow weary of his talk, he has nothing seriously whenever i beat him he has an excuse, wow so coincidental