Need Creative Writing Feedback (1 Viewer)

[MATHmaster]

I have an assessment in week 8 and need some feedback.
Does anyone want to give it a read?

 

[Dash8]

You can send it to me if you like.

 

[LoveHateSchool]

You can inbox it to me also.

 

[Michelle Lin]

If you want another pair of eyes to read over it feel free to send it to me.

 

[jkayy1996]

I'll give you feedback if you like