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skyscraper

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opinion of this thesis please guiys :S

New thesis new question, input fellas?

Question: Explain how Educating Rita and ONE other related text of your own choosing portray the consequences of moving into the world.

Thesis: During ones lifetime, they may decide that they are no longer satisfied with their current lifestyle, and decide to move into a new world.[<--introduction line, not really part of thesis] However, while moving into the world will bring about positive changes and experiences, there will be negative consequences we have to deal with aswell, but we can learn from these, and use the experience gained to our advantage.




question: in what way are people and their experiences brought to life through distinctively visual

thesis: Throughout an individuals life, our perceptions of people, places and ideas can change through our worldly experiences, aswell as ones growth and maturity. we may end up realising that, what we once believed in was wrong all along. this has been demonstrated to us through the distinctively visual in [texts, dun]

idk if it answered the question, so input wanted !:rudolf::bosman:
 
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opinion of this thesis please guiys :S

question: in what way are people and their experiences brought to life through distinctively visual

thesis: Throughout an individuals life, our perceptions of people, places and ideas can change through our worldly experiences, aswell as ones growth and maturity. we may end up realising that, what we once believed in was wrong all along. this has been demonstrated to us through the distinctively visual in [texts, dun]

idk if it answered the question, so input wanted !:rudolf::bosman:
That sounds a little too strong of an argument. IMO it doesnt really fit well in your introduction.
 

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Really long and very tedious.

And you dont mention your texts in a thesis...
 
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New thesis new question, input fellas?

Question: Explain how Educating Rita and ONE other related text of your own choosing portray the consequences of moving into the world.

Thesis: During ones lifetime, they may decide that they are no longer satisfied with their current lifestyle, and decide to move into a new world.[<--introduction line, not really part of thesis] However, while moving into the world will bring about positive changes and experiences, there will be negative consequences we have to deal with aswell, but we can learn from these, and use the experience gained to our advantage.
 

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opinion of this thesis please guiys :S

question: in what way are people and their experiences brought to life through distinctively visual

thesis: Throughout an individuals life, our perceptions of people, places and ideas can change through our worldly experiences, aswell as ones growth and maturity. we may end up realising that, what we once believed in was wrong all along. this has been demonstrated to us through the distinctively visual in [texts, dun]

idk if it answered the question, so input wanted !:rudolf::bosman:
Awesome thesis! I just used it for my assessment, hope you don't mind :awesome: xx
 

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