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Basically I'm using this quote (from the film Flags of our Fathers) for my Module C essay:

Ira: “Hank didn’t raise that flag, He raised the other one. The real flag”
Bud: “The what? The… real flag? There’s a real flag?”

Just wondering how i integrate I quote which has two speakers, or should I do them separately or something?

Normally would just ask my teacher but he's not replying to my emails :/ Thanks for the help
 

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You could break up the paragraph e.g.

This can be seen where the characters say:

Ira: “Hank didn’t raise that flag, He raised the other one. The real flag”
Bud: “The what? The… real flag? There’s a real flag?”

revealing the...



Or something like:

This can be seen in the respective dialogue between Ira and Bud: "Hank didn’t raise that flag, He raised the other one. The real flag / The what? The… real flag? There’s a real flag?"
 

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Thanks alot for the help! I think I'll go with the second option, seems to make the essay flow well :)
 

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