stealth shinobi i think you stole the idea maybe from twilight?
have you read the book.. cause it sounds exactly like it. make up something totally different. look outside the box.. a vietnam veteren or something..
i really need help with creative writing. it needs to be done by 7 tonight as i start my english half yearly tomorrow and i need to send it to my teacher to mark and tell me whats wrong with it. has anyone got any good ideas that i could use? please let me know asap.
thanx.