swagster0906
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Hey guys, is anyone willing to have a read of my practice essay on the tempest and give feedback pls?
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leehuan
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Crudely,
It's at least a B if it attacks the question and manipulates the rubric effectively. And of course, a proper structure. The rest can include:
- Discerning choices of quotes
- Skilful choice of techniques; multiple techniques
- Writing with flair and style
- Effective related text used
It's at least a B if it attacks the question and manipulates the rubric effectively. And of course, a proper structure. The rest can include:
- Discerning choices of quotes
- Skilful choice of techniques; multiple techniques
- Writing with flair and style
- Effective related text used
TamedCloud
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yea just pm
I have spare time on my hands, so sure why not? Feel free to PM me.
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I'm willing to look over essays - PM me!