can someone read my personal profile and like give feedback? (sorry i sound desperate, i am) (1 Viewer)

[hellowellohehe]

hey is there anyone who is willing to read my personal profile for a school i am applying for? (st marys senior) i want like heavy criticism, and just being honest, and if there are any grammar, sentence or structure errors please tell me? i can send through insta or maybe this platform? please also if you can mention major things too, im willing to change as much i can to get in.

sorry if im sounding so desperate lmao

 

[lolcti]

no offence I don't get the hype