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Jethro G

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Ha ha ha! You dumb bastard! It's not a schooner...
i believe it is time...

time to engage in that orgy of slander and libel on each others' works...
time to sigh in relief or dread or envy...
time to cry in happiness or grief...

time to post your major works...

(but how?????)

i see three options in the reaction to seeing others' works ahead..

1.swallow
2.spit
3.sprog

swallow - you give up and resign yourself to defeat

spit - you buck... you furrow your brow and mention pretentious/wank/masturbatory/"too deep"/"what the fuck is that sposed to mean?"/unfair... yes, you mention unfair...

sprog - you close your eyes and moan... realising just how much better yours is than everyone elses... and how bad its gonna taste for them...

well?...
which are you?
...
 
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ignoring jet, who wants to post their major works?
 

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you got to remember jet, i'm trying to sound like a girl there...
 

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you's can read mine if you want.
but email me for a copy (flere_@hotmail.com), i don't really want to be spit on in such a public arena.
 

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come on guys! everyone was fully into posting their major works after they were due... so go for it! i really want to read some.
 

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I'm currently HTML-ing mine, and then I will put it up on my website for the world to see, I promise!!
 

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Jethro, I loved your poetry. I would love to read your reflection statement too, it would be cool if you posted it up as well!
 

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i guess i really should throw together some sort of website to chuck my MW on or something...i'll do it next time i'm procrastinating, now that i can't procrastinate by claiming to be doing ext 2:p
 

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you people can read mine if it goes in "young writers showcase"

or more likely, "band 1 example in standards package"
 

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Jethro, I really like your poems, especially "Red Badge of Courage" -- You are really brave/daring! (This is a good thing!).

I like your style too, reminds me of Eliot.
 

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