structure for billy elliot essay! urgent help needed + heres my present structure! (1 Viewer)

[aazoury]

alright, i need a structure for my billy eliiot into the world essay

im thinking:

1. defenition of the concept 'into the world'
2. intro sentance (based around the question)
3. significat images
4. significant quotes
5. significant filming techniques
6. supplementry tect 1
7. supplementry text 2

so what do you think? please give me advise if you have a better structure rrealllly need help..cheers

 

[$hiftyIceQueen]

have you related them :
-to "into the world"
-an talk about his transition ..from old world into the new one?

other then that your structure is good

 

[aazoury]

yeah i have related them to into the world...alright well than

ks for the advice mate

 

[aazoury]

Actually forget that last post, heres my new stucture.

1. defeniton of the concept 'into the world'
2. Intro sentance based around question
3. billys former world [ description of former world, significant images and quotes of his former world]
4. Billy's desire to enter the new world [ Images and quotes to express his desire]
5. Billy's new world [ description of his new world, significant images and quotes of his new world]
6. 'music' as an additonal 'voice' in the film and how it relates to into the world
7. supplementry texts 1 and 2

is that better then my last one? only problem is, struggling a little for time


thanks...