Would anyone like to read my B essay? critique/response wanted (1 Viewer)

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Hello, after the first assessment task i have changed my belonging essay a bit. Although i hoped to write a few extra paragraphs to learn for exams (adapt to essay questions) so far this term i havn't had the time.
PM me and ill send it to you via email: critique and things i need to work on is very very welcome:)
(text is Romulus My Father)
Thankyou
 

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