my thought is that lung cancer requires years to develop by checking their health check in the past year is not sufficient, he should follow them up for a longer period.
I think yours is fine, my one is mainly focused on how belonging to other people can shape one's identity. It was very hard for me to write something for text 2. I text one, I said something like her identity is shaped by rejection from other friends around her for text 1 and for text 3 I said...