I have read the person who gave you a one star's review and I strongly disagree w them!! I have not completed SAC fully yet, but I have been predicted a band 6 pip and overall mark so I think I can also make an appropriate comment. To begin with, I loveddd your title page it immediately stood out!! The intro and log were great, I would've separated the intro into smaller paragraphs and emphasised more on Social and cultural literacy as it is important to acknowledge it. I briefly skimmed through your chapters, and they were also great!! The only thing I feel like you could've done better is introduce your evident less (you don't have to keep stating questionnaire or content analysis, the marker can see it in the footnotes) and use more secondary sources but your synthesis was excellent and I loved the structure. Def a well-done PIP and I'm sure you got an amazing mark!!
