Yeah, dialogue is good but there is quite a lot of it. My teacher doesn't like us using dialogue, and if I were to use that much I would get marked down. Try to find the happy medium because you never do know who is going to mark it. Either way - I think the story is great.
"I'm glad i'm a beta, because I don't work so hard!"
"Everybody's happy nowadays"
"The more stitches the less riches"
“One cubic centimeter cures ten gloomy sentiments”
“Everyone works for everyone else”
“When the individual feels the community reels”
“Never put off until tomorrow the fun...
Hey thanks for that, it's been really helpful, but what does "score music vs. Score
" mean? I understand what a score is....but yeah. My teacher could explain it either lol.
Does anyone know where I can find some information about the characters in Bladerunner? I've got to do an analysis for all the major ones, any information off the top of your heads would be greatly appreciated also. :)