Thanks mate. I think I'll use it and shock some people at the marking centre.
It's easily the most extreme thing I've ever read. Quite interesting though. You can find it at the bottom of the wikipedia page.
I was thinking of doing "I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream" by Harlan Ellison. The problem is, the text is extremely weird and creepy. Do you think the markers will mind this, or see it as an "original" choice and commend it? I think it's excellent for personal and sexual powerplay, which...
Hi, I was just wondering if anyone could check out this piece I wrote and give me some ideas on improving it. What sort of mark could I expect from this?