- "with Louis Armstrong’s ‘what a wonderful life’ manipulating the emotions of the audience"
there's no such song. did you mean what a wonderful world?
- "Big brothers’ " should be "Big Brother's"
- "Love, plenty, peace and truth" -> "Love, Plenty, Peace and Truth"
- "republican" -> "Republican"
- "democrat" -> "Democrat"
- "Richard baker" -> "Richard Baker", additionally the brackets in this part appear to be misconstructed, they are too big
just some corrections