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  1. c.mcfisticuffs

    journey story help!

    thanx berra - that's really useful n i see what you mean. I'll clarify those parts up a bit more and see how it goes. best of luck to you too!
  2. c.mcfisticuffs

    journey story help!

    thanx you guys - yeh, i've gone through a few versions and tried to make it more succint so i'll see where else i can do that. I'm glad you dont mind the idea, so i'll just polish it up and familiarise myself with it as best as i can. and i guess linking it to the stimulus will have to come...
  3. c.mcfisticuffs

    journey story help!

    Hey everyone - my first post! I know this is leaving things stupidly late, but i was looking for some feedback on my creative writing idea for journeys paper 1 and my friend said this was a good place to get it. Any feedback would be marvellous, if anyone's got time. Thanx, Derrick
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