2023 HSC chat (3 Viewers)

[nsw..wollongong]

my sister is like obsessed with her rn so I have to listen to her every day on the way to school

my condolences i would jump out the car

 

[carrotsss]

my condolences i would jump out the car

ok she’s not that bad tbh I sorta like a couple of the songs

 

[nsw..wollongong]

when u got ur drivers licence last week or when u tripped and fell into ur ex's bed

 

[s9a]

guys what would u do if u got a 31.43 atar

 

[nsw..wollongong]

guys what would u do if u got a 31.43 atar

tafe or torrens.

 

[Masaken]

guys what would u do if u got a 31.43 atar

celebrate (at least it's not a mystery mark)

 

[nsw..wollongong]

honestly tafe bc u can bring ur atar up

 

[synthesisFR]

ok she’s not that bad tbh I sorta like a couple of the songs

Guys we finally found out what sort of music he likes

 

[nsw..wollongong]

Guys we finally found out what sort of music he likes

NO what happened to blake shelton and Keith urban and shania twain

 

[synthesisFR]

sorry i overestimated you're getting a 63.8

Sorry I was joking I don’t wanna label myself with a Atar to avoid performing stress during my exams

 

[SadCeliac]

I'm moody so I'm gonna be harsh with my feedback


what even is that first sentence is there a question ur answering?? is this ur thesis? this sounds like the beginning of a discursive
"eliot's poetry is no different" mate this isn't mod c change it
"to reflect his current state of mind" no what is it? was it rlly his current state of mind or was it a preach of the return to the traditionalist past? is this his purpose?
"spirituality and man's connection to himself" --> good.
"thus this statement" WHAT STATEMENT
"to a large extent" don't say this, markers hate it. show that u agree with the statement without outwardly saying it like this, eg Eliot indeed posits that...
"subject matter of spirituality" just say spirituality bruh and also hollow men isn't all abt spirituality its also abt the naturalist intellect and DISILLUSIONMENT WHERE IS UR COMMENTARY ON DISILLUSIONMENT THIS IS ELIOT'S WHOLE PURPOSE!!!
"post-ww2 depression and a lack of hope" first off, u shoulda mentioned context and the 2nd industrial revolution earlier. secondly, what is that lack of hope, hope for what? life fulfilment? material satisfaction? what caused the lack of hope? WW2? DID THE WAR CAUSE THE LACK OF HOPE??? IT WAS A VICTORY BRUH
"depicts a world void of spirituality and connection, suggesting that man is trapped within a hopeless reality." good. by the way. this is disillusionment.
"on the other hand, the more optimistic" i disagree its not optimistic its actually rather critical of towns unfriendly and the anxiety surrounding the achievement of a "satisfactory" life bc the magus questions himself a lot like "were we all led that way for birth or death?"
" the individual is able to transcend the physical constraints of the modern world to find a better purpose. " --> beautiful. more of this.
"approach on critical subject matters change over time." yuck what does this mean. does this mean that his texts are credent? textually integrous? relevant in the contemporary realm?

do better gluten.

THANKS BAE

 

[SadCeliac]

my sister is like obsessed with her rn so I have to listen to her every day on the way to school

"blOOOD sUCkERRRRR" all the time like can the radio just not

 

[synthesisFR]

oh wops

No don’t listen to him

also I highly doubt I’d get 99.75 at this point, maths/chem are good (unless I screw up they are 99.95 equiv based on trials) but English and esp physics are a problem rn, and I’ve also been doing way less work than I should’ve lately

tbf I only need an 80 ATAR for my course anyway

Sthu

 

[scaryshark09]

Sthu

no i reckon carrots is overrated, no hate
like i estimate 99.5 for him

 

[synthesisFR]

no i reckon carrots is overrated, no hate
like i estimate 99.5 for him

that’s still so good but he’ll do better

 

[nsw..wollongong]

no i reckon carrots is overrated, no hate
like i estimate 99.5 for him

urr overrated

 

[scaryshark09]

urr overrated

why, what do you think ill get

 

[carrotsss]

Guys we finally found out what sort of music he likes

it’s not music I listen to on my own

 

[scaryshark09]

it’s not music I listen to on my own

keep lying to yourself

 

[its_ace21]

what was ur first option?

I got my first option yay

law but wtv i was so confident