change assessment - HELP! (1 Viewer)

[~*MIZREX*~]

I just got my results back for the change portfolio, I performed really really bad! I was told i need to focus more on analytical language, does any one know any sites or nething that gives information on this and examples? Cos i only just started advanced this yr

 

[kini mini]

It sounds like you wrote a very descriptive assignment without analysing your texts in great detail. If you post parts of your assignment we could suggest some changes .

 

[Orange Juice]

hahahha everyone did sooooooooo bad
apparently state avg was 9 tho

it was worth 15% so big

 

[anti]

"Analytical language" generally shows HOW an effect is created, not just the effect itself.

Does that help?