Essay help (1 Viewer)

[korrupt samurai]

I know this my sound a bit wierd but could someone please type like an sample of an essay plan in regards to effectiveness essays, im not really good at them and my legal teachers dosen't usually give comments regarding how to improve my essay, just a mark.
I get like 15/25 for effectiveness essays (family & Global), so i would like to improve the marks in the actual HSC test.

Eg: this is what i usually do in essays

Intro: blah blah blah

Issues1

remedy # (depending on the amount of remedies available for that issue) - explain what is is, include media info or relevant legislation. then i evaluate that remedy in terms of P.e.a.r.e or that other one for society.

Issues2

remedy (depending on the amount of remedies available for that issue) - explain what is is, include media info or relevant legislation. tehn i evaluate that remedy interms of P.e.a.r.e or that other one.

Issues3

remedy (depending on the amount of remedies available for that issue) - explain what is is, include media info or relevant legislation. tehn i evaluate that remedy interms of P.e.a.r.e or that other one.

conclusion: come to a conclusion about the effectiveness of the law in resolving the various "issues" for civilians.


Thanks