i can definitely a good start, your paragraphs though are lacking more explanation...they start off but relate it to how it will help or how it will affect your concepts...particularly the basic plot and medium...i think i spent 500 words on that baby since i felt it was immensely important since i did not have content at this point
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"This supposed bias and prejudice is evident within society through..."
eat up words like that, and is it a limit of 1000 ? remember if you cant write anymore dont force it, it only ends up worse, if its a max of 1000 words your fine, just add a bit more detail and you should have at least 850-900
hope that helped