john donne sunne rising - need techniques (1 Viewer)

[d00d]

besides the commanding and imperative tone at the begginning when he says "busie old foole unruly sunne" and the conceit "she is all states...", i don't have any other techniques. plz help out.

 

[Minai]

hmm
off the top of my head...I think I talked about "Goe" and "Call" as imperatives, again reinforcing his commanding tone, reflecting his self-centered nature towards his love.

Also at the end, I mentioned that Donne then proves his conceit through the unlikely paradox, claiming that the Sun needs to shine upon them, and in doing so, shines upon everyone else, again showing imperialistic arrogance and fierce individual expression of emotion.

 

[kini mini]

I remember saying something about materialism in "both Indias of spice and myne" (the lover) in addition to what Minai said.

 

[Daedalus]

dood email me at slim@computerfaction.com.au and ill reply with my notes on sunn rising, got lots of techniques

do u have a rTf for power to give me? doesnt matter if u dont ill still help u

if anyone is good at eng and can give me notes and RTF for power and JC please do. i have these for trade
http://www.boredofstudies.org/community/showthread.php?s=&postid=115215#post115215

i can also pay for it