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Most of the time for this mod I do 2 body paragraphs, 8 evidence (4 shakespeare 4 pacino),

My teacher says it's better to do 6 with more analysis for the essay modules, including mod A, but for this mod its a bit harder for me when juggling dissonances and assonances

Would it be fine to do 3 shakespeare 3 pacino but only two paragraphs? e.g. first para 1 pacino 2 shakespeare, second para 2 shakespeare 1 pacino

Or does balance matter and should I branch out and do 3 paragraphs (2 evidence each)?

sorry for coke rant hope u understand pls help
 

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Most of the time for this mod I do 2 body paragraphs, 8 evidence (4 shakespeare 4 pacino),

My teacher says it's better to do 6 with more analysis for the essay modules, including mod A, but for this mod its a bit harder for me when juggling dissonances and assonances

Would it be fine to do 3 shakespeare 3 pacino but only two paragraphs? e.g. first para 1 pacino 2 shakespeare, second para 2 shakespeare 1 pacino

Or does balance matter and should I branch out and do 3 paragraphs (2 evidence each)?

sorry for coke rant hope u understand pls help
Whatever you do, the depth of analysis is important. If you think the amount of quotes is hindering you from making detailed analysis, then cut a couple quotes. But if not, you can do with more quotes.
 

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