need serious help with english advanced!!!!! lol (1 Viewer)

[cauliflower00001]

i'm having a problem!!!! can anyone give me some tips on how to fit 3 quotes and analysis plus link to thesis in a 200 word paragraph?
this word count has been ENFORCED on me this is not self inflicted. pls help!!!!

 

[wollongong warrior]

Better wording (deliver your points differently if you structure them redundantly), trim down your quotes and make your points more specific
Practice makes perfect and keep consciously trying to find ways to trim down your words, not only when you're prompted to
200 words shouldn't be that bad to get to, all my paragraphs were ~150-200 with 4 quotes