Nihongo de 日本語で (3 Viewers)

[Lexicographer]

http://www.boredofstudies.org/community/showthread.php?t=15484

この新しいスレッドの*で日本語で話して下さい！

 

[babydoll_]

こんばんわ！　私はナンシーです。　私は大媦生です。　私はベトナリ人です。　うん～～～。。。　どうぞよろしく＾＿＿＾

EDIT/ thats really stuffed up, it keeps changing and why is there a face in the middle?

 

[Lexicographer]

ちょっと。。。僕のは間違ったな～

悪いぞ！

 

[mushroom_head]

日本語のフォラリはちょっとしずかになったそうな~



omg..how stoopid! it changed my "ni" into a "da"

romaaji de taipu shitara dou?

 

[ichig0]

hey all you smart Japanese students or people... could you read my speech and check for any errors?? i think the topic was daily routine and home & neighbourhood. どもありがとうございます。

みんなさんこんにちは。私はジョイーでオーストラリアから 来ました。シドニーのカンタベーリに住んでいます。みちはとてもしずかですけどなむれるから好きです。家は新しくてひろいです。しずかなから私はいつも音楽 をききます。
家の近くにきれいでみどりが多いがあります。あるいて三分ぐらいかかります。バスケットボールーとかサッカーのことができますけど私は見えてなけです。
しょぼしょや病院やたくさん骅せがあります。カフェもあって新しいそうです。とてもべんりでしょう。駅が二つのあいなに私の家があります。でもバスての方が近いですからバスで媦檡に行きます。二十分ぐらいかかります。オーストラリアの時間の時間は三時から九時までですけど日本の時間の時間はもっとながいですな。**がおわってから時々図書館にいってしゅくないをしたり本をよんなりします。そして帰って休みます。

btw im supposed to be an exchange student in Japan making the speech..

 

[frodo]

could you type it in romaji? i'm assuming its in unicode but there's question marks everywhere that i'm guessing aren't supposed to be there

 

[ichig0]

blah...serious?? oh thats soooo uncool~! ><" okok..

minnasan konnichi ha. watashi ha joii de oosutoraria kara kimashita. shidonii no kantabeeri ni sundeimasu. michi ha shizuka desu kedo nemureru kara suki desu. uchi ha atarashikute hiroi. shizuka dakara watashi ha itsumo ongaku wo kikimasu. ie no chikaku ni kirei de midori ga ooi koen ga arimasu. aruite sanpun gurai kakarimasu. basukettobooroo toka sakka no koto ga dekimasu. demo watashi ha miete dake desu.
shobosho ya byooin ya takusan mise ga arimasu. kafe mo atte atarashii soudesu. totemo benri deshou. eki ga futatsu no aida ni ie ga arimasu demo basu te(ba?) no hou ga chikai to omoimasu.
tomodachi to basu de gakkou ni itte nijuuppun gurai kakarimasu. oosutoraria no gakkou jikan ha kyu ji kara san ji made desu kedo nihon de ha motto negai desune. gakkou ga owatte kara tokidoki toshokan ni itte shukudai wo shitari hon wo yondari shimasu. soshite kaette yasumimasu.

 

[mushroom_head]

blah...serious?? oh thats soooo uncool~! ><" okok..

minnasan konnichi ha. watashi ha joii de oosutoraria kara kimashita. shidonii no kantabeeri ni sundeimasu. michi ha shizuka desu kedo nemureru kara suki desu. uchi ha atarashikute hiroi (hirokute). shizuka dakara watashi ha itsumo ongaku wo kikimasu. ie no chikaku ni kirei de midori ga ooi koen ga arimasu. aruite sanpun gurai kakarimasu. basukettobooroo toka sakka no koto ga dekimasu. demo watashi ha miete(miru?) dake desu.
shobosho ya byooin ya takusan mise ga arimasu. kafe mo atte atarashii soudesu. totemo benri deshou. eki ga futatsu(futatsu eki??) no aida ni ie ga arimasu demo basu te(ba?) no hou ga chikai to omoimasu.
tomodachi to basu de gakkou ni itte nijuuppun gurai kakarimasu. oosutoraria no gakkou jikan ha kyu(ku) ji kara san ji made desu kedo nihon de ha motto negai(nagai) desune. gakkou ga owatte kara tokidoki toshokan ni itte shukudai wo shitari hon wo yondari shimasu. soshite kaette yasumimasu.

wow~ it's really accurate..
i hope my corrections are right. I typed them up in bold up there. Someone plz correct me if i'm wrong.

 

[ichig0]

ooo hey thanx! not that many mistakes so it's cool... ^^ domo.

 

[babydoll_]

LOL sorry, nitpicking, but shouldn't watashi ha be romanized into watashi wa?

 

[ichig0]

haha.. is it? i used to write it like that... but my japanese friend kept telling me not to... probably bcoz i might confuse me with the character わ
but yeh... it's pronounced as 'wa' ^^

 

[govich]

ok ill go through everything i think is sus

oosutoraria kara kimashita.

you came from australia? maybe you wanna say you were born in australia or something? sounds a bit weird.. maybe im takin it the wrong way though

michi ha shizuka desu kedo nemureru kara suki desu

your street is quiet but you can sleep so you like it

doesn't sound right?

sanpun

sanbun

demo watashi ha miete dake desu

not right, but i dont know how to say it properly using dake, so i'll say:

demo watashi wa miru bakari shimasu.

i think thats what youre trying to say

takusan mise

takusan no mise

eki ga futatsu no aida ni ie ga arimasu demo basu te(ba?) no hou ga chikai to omoimasu.

not sure what you want to say .. if you want to say 'my house is between two train stations but i think the bus stop is closer' then something like:

ie wa futatsu no eki no aida ni arimasu ga basu noriba wa eki yori motto chikai to omoimasu

oosutoraria no gakkou jikan ha kyu ji kara san ji made desu kedo

umm 'gakkou jikan' i don't think is right but ive got a mental blank right now
edit: as someone already said, kyu->ku

motto negai

nagai ?

soshite kaette yasumimasu

maybe say uchi ni/he kaette or something? seems a bit ambiguous

omg sorry for typing so much..hope it helps tho

 

[ichig0]

whOa~ thanks...

michi ha shizuka desu kedo nemureru kara suki desu --> doesn't that mean.. my street is quiet but because i can sleep well, i like it? i know the sentences sound abit silly but the teachers expect us to use "senior structures" -_-

gakkou jikan --> should it be gakkou no jikan?


domo

 

[govich]

michi ha shizuka desu kedo nemureru kara suki desu --> doesn't that mean.. my street is quiet but because i can sleep well, i like it? i know the sentences sound abit silly but the teachers expect us to use "senior structures" -_-

hehe umm yeah .. but read the english and i think the meaning's a bit awkward.. maybe if you were saying 'my street isn't quiet but because i can sleep well i like it' .. if you get what im tryin to say..

i think if you didn't use kedo it'd work better.. like:

michi wa shizuka de nemureru kara suki desu

my street is quiet, and i can sleep so i like it.
BTW to say sleep well use yoku; yoku nemureru.

gakkou jikan --> should it be gakkou no jikan?

sounds more right..but i'm not sure that's how you say it. i'll check up on it tho

 

[ichig0]

hehe umm yeah .. but read the english and i think the meaning's a bit awkward.. maybe if you were saying 'my street isn't quiet but because i can sleep well i like it' .. if you get what im tryin to say..

i think if you didn't use kedo it'd work better.. like:

michi wa shizuka de nemureru kara suki desu

my street is quiet, and i can sleep so i like it.
BTW to say sleep well use yoku; yoku nemureru.

aa.. sou sou... wakatta

 

[govich]

yeah gakkou no jikan seems to be correct

ohh ohh and this just hit me..

demo watashi ha miete dake desu

instead of bakari like i said before, use shika (i dont think bakari is in the syllabus?):

miru shika shimasen.

 

[ichig0]

miru shika shimasen. --> does that mean, 'i can only watch' ?? haha
i haven't learnt 'shika' yet.. =/... im only in year 11..

 

[govich]

miru shika shimasen. --> does that mean, 'i can only watch' ?? haha
i haven't learnt 'shika' yet.. =/... im only in year 11..

omg!! u should have told me .. i would have been nicer ?

hmm if u were trying to say i can only watch, then use mieru..

yeah 'miru shika shimasen' means i only watch.

....if u want anything else explained then jst ask.. i have another friend in yr11 who i help with jap n i always gotta watch out that i dont use all these structures with her too.. haha umm yeh

 

[ichig0]

haha.. gomen gomen~~
well thanks a million~

are you a japanese teacher or something?

 

[govich]

haha.. gomen gomen~~
well thanks a million~

are you a japanese teacher or something?

haha narr i just like it..n our jap teacher is mad..

no worries